Grishnaka

Name: Grishnaka
Race: Aquilonian
Age: 21
Clan: Balance


Description: Grishnaka is tall, strong as a bull, around about 6 ft, long black hair, blue eyes with a scar going down his right eye, olive skin tone. Prefered weapons, shield and sword however like to carry a polearm on his back. Very heavey footed and strong built, big arms and broud shoulders, making him a good armer weilding soilder.

Background: He was brought up in a quiet village in the forest, used to hunting and fighting for what is right. Tought how to fight by his father and never to back down despite all odds. Gained his scars from a close hunting accident, in which he was pounced on by a panther which was able to get a lucky scratch to his right eye. Since that accident Grishnaka became more aware of his surroundings, making him not only strong but smart aswell. However, when a trespasser came into the village, Grishnaka acted with out thinking and killed him. This lead to his village and family banishing him from the village for eternity. He left the village and refuses to be called by his second name. Started to weild dark magic and heavy weapons.

Reason for wanting to join: Grishnaka now wants to find a group of companians in which he can do good with. Where he can live with people that he can call family.

I liked this its easy to understand your character what he has been through and how he now wants to live in a safe enviroment with people he can call brothers its good but lets just see what Rashad has to say lol.

The name is perhaps too close to the orc Grisnhak from Tolkien's "The Two Towers", (or the Black-Metal-singer "Count Grishnak", taken from the same book)

Well rounded application. Good luck to you.

I have no major problems here. Good luck with the application.

Don't see any big issues, seems like a likely reaction from an aquilonian village. Don't really think Grishnaka is a fitting aquilonian name though so I'd suggest to change that.

Did you want him Varon? We have alot of people going for Balance right now..

Welcome to the guild Grishnaka.

Rashad wrote:

We have alot of people going for Balance right now..

I am guessing its just because Balance is seen as the clan with the most action/PvP happening.

Balance is happy to have him.

Balance it is, want me to add to the wiki?

well you don't have to, but I'd appreciate not having to do the work :p

Welcome mate

Welcome!

Haseo Out

Welcome Grishnaka, to the House of the New Dawn!

I think Grishnaka is a good name it shoudnt matter if its close to the Ork in Lord Of The Rings?...

Saze

It does matter because it's not really Conan-like.